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Daniel Baldwin's avatar

Stretch and scrape, stretch, scrape,

Peel the pulp, thin as a crepe,

Toss the meat, stretch, scrape

Honeygloom's avatar

I love this! It captures the rhythm of the work really well.

Daniel Baldwin's avatar

Oh yeah, I was trying to write a children’s singalong song for chores

ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Dusk’s claws scrape the sun

They serrate, rip asunder

Until day is done

Honeygloom's avatar

Love this! So violently poetic!

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Nov 25, 2023Edited
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Honeygloom's avatar

Love this. Hope he gets those punks.

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Nov 25, 2023
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Honeygloom's avatar

Well, all we’ve got is the world we deserve.