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Stretch and scrape, stretch, scrape,

Peel the pulp, thin as a crepe,

Toss the meat, stretch, scrape

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I love this! It captures the rhythm of the work really well.

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Oh yeah, I was trying to write a children’s singalong song for chores

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Dusk’s claws scrape the sun

They serrate, rip asunder

Until day is done

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Love this! So violently poetic!

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Love this. Hope he gets those punks.

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Nov 25, 2023
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Well, all we’ve got is the world we deserve.

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