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Caro Henry's avatar

Foul breath of the grave

Worms weave through the tangled past

Fingers of decay

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Honeygloom's avatar

Beautiful, wow!🖤

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Tracy's avatar

Loved this!

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Daniel Baldwin's avatar

The smell hangs, wet, foul,

Unlocking protohuman

Memories of death.

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Honeygloom's avatar

So good! I love the idea that we have an instinctual recognition of decay🖤

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Tracy's avatar

Ohh, I especially like this one, Honeygloom! I might make a post of mine after this submission. Again, these are so much fun - I love both horror and haiku :) Prompt: Rot

Once so sweet and pure -

Time wills nothing so to stay,

Rot will have its way!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Love this!! I like the rhyme as well, very cool🖤

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

To compose haikus

Around decomposition

Is a rotten task

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Honeygloom's avatar

Aw rot is beautiful, and necessary. Love this tongue in cheek haiku🖤

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Bless you Honeygloom

Rot can also be noble

By bottle or glass

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Jessamine Halverson's avatar

Hopes were high until,

excess rain was overkill,

surely blood will spill.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Nice!! I love the sense impending doom🖤

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Jessamine Halverson's avatar

Now the crops will rot,

we failed to harvest our lot,

our hopes are now shot.

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

The taties are black blight -

the English will allow us grain,

sure, they ain't so heartless

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The Great Hunger in Ireland saw around a million starve and another two million forced to emigrate while the English landowners continued to export grain from the country.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I recently listened to a podcast series about this. So horrific. And the things the English said to justify starving the Irish? Gods I wanted to punch them through time.

Such a tragic subject, but I love the sarcasm in your poem, fits perfectly🖤

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Thanks so much for your words. As for anger, I'm too filled with anger against the present-day Anglo-Americans to give much thought to the historical imperialists.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh boy yeah, there is a lot to be angry about at present. My own country is… a cesspit, particularly.

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K.M. Bennett's avatar

New wallpaper hides

the hole in the old drywall,

the seeping, the rot

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Honeygloom's avatar

Love this!!! So much said in such a small space, well done🖤

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K.M. Bennett's avatar

Thank you 🖤.

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Theresa Greene's avatar

Odd to think of love

The ones that loved you, now dead

Rotting in their graves

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh this can be a dark thought. But also a comforting one, loved ones returning to the earth. Death has many perspectives. Well done, very thought provoking🖤

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Hybrid Sequence Media's avatar

A corpse fruit astray

fallen rot, kicked & picked dry

fermenting bug food

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love the last line! Very cool take🖤

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

“Rotten in Denmark” Will writes.

Apples fall close to the tree.

Make wicked rot gut meady wine.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ah well done, excellent wordplay today🖤

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erniet's avatar

The new cut hay lies

Raked into windrows. Then rain

Made it moldy, useless.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Love this description, well done🖤

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Rotten to the core

Fodder for the worms.

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Carolyn Jones's avatar

Super prompt!

Death begins within

Rotting from the core decays

Life returns to earth

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Honeygloom's avatar

Super haiku! I love the middle line, very cool take🖤

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Terry A. Fries's avatar

Black decay consumes

Invisible, merciless,

Souls ground out, hollowed

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ooo I love this! So dark🖤

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Colin Weston's avatar

Can you hurry up?

Its been a week already.

Mums starting to smell!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Can’t procrastinate body disposal😌🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

It made us shiver,

That deathly scent, that told us,

Our crops had succumbed... 😎

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