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erniet's avatar

Speculation starts;

The sound over analyzed....

It's just whales farting!

😂

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Honeygloom's avatar

😂 That would be so great🤣

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Dustin's avatar

LOL I like the humor in this one!

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Daniel Baldwin's avatar

The pressure starts deep

And reaches critical mass

With shuddering breach.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love how this builds, I can feel the last line rumble, well done🖤

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Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Unknown wavelengths found

From the depths a call is made

No one can answer

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh I love this! This is the beginning of a really cool story🖤

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Down deep dark forces creep

Fissures fused release mud bubbles

One gum chew rose to BLOOP

Becomes the first soda ash fizz.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love this! I feel like I’m hallucinating🖤

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David Perlmutter's avatar

The obvious answer is: icebergs.

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Honeygloom's avatar

That is what they decided, but it’s fun to imagine…

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Nico Sakaki's avatar

When the sound ruptures

When dimensions start to break

That's the beginning

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Honeygloom's avatar

This sounds like the beginning of an amazing story!! Wow!

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

I call ever more

A song from soul's depth so cold

Come join my singing

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