December 3 - Coal
Blackest of matter
Once you gave life to us all
Now they seek your death
Coal is pretty cool as a part of geologic history, that’s for sure. I like the dichotomy you invoke here, it’s thought provoking.
This is literally my first ever haiku. I had to look up the 5, 7, 5 format, lol.
Glad you liked.
Hey nice! Congrats on your first haiku! I have a haiku how to pinned to the top of my Horror Haiku section if you’re interested in learning more.
Hope to see you around!
Remnant of life past
Compacted, excavated
To burn in my forge.
I like the breadth you span before you bring it back down to daily life. Very cool.
Eyes black as midnight
Like coal buried under dusk
Reveals rocky soul
Very cool description, I love the imagery this brings up.🖤
This made me picture The Little Engine that Could shoveling its conductors into the fire to get over the hill.
A noble sacrifice for the cause.
Blackest of matter
Once you gave life to us all
Now they seek your death
Coal is pretty cool as a part of geologic history, that’s for sure. I like the dichotomy you invoke here, it’s thought provoking.
This is literally my first ever haiku. I had to look up the 5, 7, 5 format, lol.
Glad you liked.
Hey nice! Congrats on your first haiku! I have a haiku how to pinned to the top of my Horror Haiku section if you’re interested in learning more.
Hope to see you around!
Remnant of life past
Compacted, excavated
To burn in my forge.
I like the breadth you span before you bring it back down to daily life. Very cool.
Eyes black as midnight
Like coal buried under dusk
Reveals rocky soul
Very cool description, I love the imagery this brings up.🖤
This made me picture The Little Engine that Could shoveling its conductors into the fire to get over the hill.
A noble sacrifice for the cause.