December 3 - Coal
Remnant of life past
Compacted, excavated
To burn in my forge.
I like the breadth you span before you bring it back down to daily life. Very cool.
Eyes black as midnight
Like coal buried under dusk
Reveals rocky soul
Very cool description, I love the imagery this brings up.🖤
Coal is pretty cool as a part of geologic history, that’s for sure. I like the dichotomy you invoke here, it’s thought provoking.
Hey nice! Congrats on your first haiku! I have a haiku how to pinned to the top of my Horror Haiku section if you’re interested in learning more.
Hope to see you around!
This made me picture The Little Engine that Could shoveling its conductors into the fire to get over the hill.
A noble sacrifice for the cause.
Remnant of life past
Compacted, excavated
To burn in my forge.
I like the breadth you span before you bring it back down to daily life. Very cool.
Eyes black as midnight
Like coal buried under dusk
Reveals rocky soul
Very cool description, I love the imagery this brings up.🖤
Coal is pretty cool as a part of geologic history, that’s for sure. I like the dichotomy you invoke here, it’s thought provoking.
Hey nice! Congrats on your first haiku! I have a haiku how to pinned to the top of my Horror Haiku section if you’re interested in learning more.
Hope to see you around!
This made me picture The Little Engine that Could shoveling its conductors into the fire to get over the hill.
A noble sacrifice for the cause.