September 8 - Dumuzid
Inanna slew Bilulu
for the slaughter of her husband -
The seasons turn in blood
I forgot there was another Inanna/Dumuzi story. Inanna definitely comes out better in this one.
Fall to the underworld,
here you remain all winter,
until you spring forth.
I love what you did there in the last line, well done🖤
You leave us in drought,
Dog-dry and desiccated
By failing to grieve
Nice! Love the alliteration🖤
Wither in Sun's rays
Shimmer in the baking heat
Coolness will renew
Lovely imagery🖤
Shepherds look to gods
The Good Shepherd is so real
Watching over us
I love this, very tender🖤
The Underworld's snare,
Loosens once more, and there's joy,
As Spring fills the air.
*
But they miss the fact,
That each year it gets harder,
To claw his way back... 😎
I love this! Ignorance is bliss🖤
Thanks! It's definitely not as simple as just stepping on an elevator! Haha... 😎
Drops fall to dry earth
Dimuzud awakes to tears
Resurrecting life
This is beautiful🖤
Thank you! These haiku challenges are fun
Ground cracks under sun
His spirit falls underground
'til the fall deluge
I love this imagery! Reminiscent of the water cycle, which is such a cool way of thinking of it🖤
Born under March moon
Provide the feast, then you dig…
…your grave for late June.
Not a bad life, really, lots of rest🤷♀️
Inanna slew Bilulu
for the slaughter of her husband -
The seasons turn in blood
I forgot there was another Inanna/Dumuzi story. Inanna definitely comes out better in this one.
Fall to the underworld,
here you remain all winter,
until you spring forth.
I love what you did there in the last line, well done🖤
You leave us in drought,
Dog-dry and desiccated
By failing to grieve
Nice! Love the alliteration🖤
Wither in Sun's rays
Shimmer in the baking heat
Coolness will renew
Lovely imagery🖤
Shepherds look to gods
The Good Shepherd is so real
Watching over us
I love this, very tender🖤
The Underworld's snare,
Loosens once more, and there's joy,
As Spring fills the air.
*
But they miss the fact,
That each year it gets harder,
To claw his way back... 😎
I love this! Ignorance is bliss🖤
Thanks! It's definitely not as simple as just stepping on an elevator! Haha... 😎
Drops fall to dry earth
Dimuzud awakes to tears
Resurrecting life
This is beautiful🖤
Thank you! These haiku challenges are fun
Ground cracks under sun
His spirit falls underground
'til the fall deluge
I love this imagery! Reminiscent of the water cycle, which is such a cool way of thinking of it🖤
Born under March moon
Provide the feast, then you dig…
…your grave for late June.
Not a bad life, really, lots of rest🤷♀️