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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Inanna slew Bilulu

for the slaughter of her husband -

The seasons turn in blood

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Honeygloom's avatar

I forgot there was another Inanna/Dumuzi story. Inanna definitely comes out better in this one.

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Jessamine Halverson's avatar

Fall to the underworld,

here you remain all winter,

until you spring forth.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love what you did there in the last line, well done🖤

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

You leave us in drought,

Dog-dry and desiccated

By failing to grieve

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Honeygloom's avatar

Nice! Love the alliteration🖤

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Wither in Sun's rays

Shimmer in the baking heat

Coolness will renew

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Honeygloom's avatar

Lovely imagery🖤

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Theresa Greene's avatar

Shepherds look to gods

The Good Shepherd is so real

Watching over us

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love this, very tender🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

The Underworld's snare,

Loosens once more, and there's joy,

As Spring fills the air.

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But they miss the fact,

That each year it gets harder,

To claw his way back... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love this! Ignorance is bliss🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! It's definitely not as simple as just stepping on an elevator! Haha... 😎

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M. N. Tarrint's avatar

Drops fall to dry earth

Dimuzud awakes to tears

Resurrecting life

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Honeygloom's avatar

This is beautiful🖤

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M. N. Tarrint's avatar

Thank you! These haiku challenges are fun

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Dylan Delgado's avatar

Ground cracks under sun

His spirit falls underground

'til the fall deluge

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love this imagery! Reminiscent of the water cycle, which is such a cool way of thinking of it🖤

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Born under March moon

Provide the feast, then you dig…

…your grave for late June.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Not a bad life, really, lots of rest🤷‍♀️

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