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Forkbeard Jon's avatar

Clack! One careless stone.

Below, villagers wake to

the growing thunder.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love haikus that can serve as a trigger to a whole story. This is so good!!🖤

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Miguel S.'s avatar

God damn! I love this one! Well done 🥶🥶🥶

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Caro Henry's avatar

I agree! Love this!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you!

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Caro Henry's avatar

Better late than never!

Fear echoes through pines

A rumble from a distance

The mountain awakes

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love this! It’s like the mountain is coming alive!🖤

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

Jeez, with being mentioned in a note, I feel the pressure....

Avalanche of words

Buried in a lexicon

The weight of lingo

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Honeygloom's avatar

And you delivered, as usual. Well done🖤

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