October 9
"You have been waiting,"
Satan explained with a grin
"In the wrong damned line."
Ha, pulled out of line by the Lord of Darkness Himself, that’s great! I love it!
Many times I warned
Of the river’s undertow
Garden forsaken
Wonderful sense of foreboding and loss. And I like the shift to a less obvious underworld as well.
Thank you!
The last man on earth
Alone in the dark at night
Hears a whispered word
Oo, I like the way you went with this one. There is a lot going on, very nice!
There’s a king above,
But he’s not whom you should fear.
It’s the king of hell.
Nice! Putting the fear back in infernal!
The journey is long
Fire and brimstone lapped heat
Lust competes with Hades
On fire 🔥!
Hell's other people,
They say. But I'd give the world
Not to be alone.
Heartbreaking, but I also really like how you played with the prompt.
Bright light not far off
Sulfur fumes erupt from flames
Hands push me nearer
"You have been waiting,"
Satan explained with a grin
"In the wrong damned line."
Ha, pulled out of line by the Lord of Darkness Himself, that’s great! I love it!
Many times I warned
Of the river’s undertow
Garden forsaken
Wonderful sense of foreboding and loss. And I like the shift to a less obvious underworld as well.
Thank you!
The last man on earth
Alone in the dark at night
Hears a whispered word
Oo, I like the way you went with this one. There is a lot going on, very nice!
There’s a king above,
But he’s not whom you should fear.
It’s the king of hell.
Nice! Putting the fear back in infernal!
The journey is long
Fire and brimstone lapped heat
Lust competes with Hades
On fire 🔥!
Hell's other people,
They say. But I'd give the world
Not to be alone.
Heartbreaking, but I also really like how you played with the prompt.
Bright light not far off
Sulfur fumes erupt from flames
Hands push me nearer