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Richbee's avatar

Deep delectable siren

Sleeps little to wend her way’s singing

Drags down my body to lair

The mermaid so fair.

Honeygloom's avatar

Very well done! I absolutely love the first line🖤

Richbee's avatar

Yes like having Maine lobster, claws at you and tail is best part.

Honeygloom's avatar

Lol, I’m vegetarian, idk which end of anything to eat😂

Richbee's avatar

You questioning lobster or mermaid.

Honeygloom's avatar

Um… I guess both😂 I can’t see myself eating either.

Richbee's avatar

It’s okay just an old fish tale. On a scale of 1 to 10 in your vegan state perhaps a low two versus pescatarian 10.

Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Haunted eyes searching

Silver notes erase my mind

Take me to my doom

Honeygloom's avatar

Total surrender, I really love the hopeless beauty of this🖤

🌸 Carolyn Jones 🌸's avatar

Song of the siren

Alluring call to the sea

Drowning symphony.

Honeygloom's avatar

I love “drowning symphony” it’s so tragically beautiful🖤

Amos's avatar

From deep I have come

Fools seek fortune on the sea

But the deep seeks them

Honeygloom's avatar

I mean. 😬That’s really scary. I love it so much🖤

Nico Sakaki's avatar

when the sea breathes in

it's always the pretty ones

who drown in our tears

Honeygloom's avatar

I love this🖤 It gives me feels I’ve been trying to put into words but kind of can’t. Just 🙌

Nico Sakaki's avatar

Thanks! ☺️

erniet's avatar

Oh wond'rous beauty!

How can I love thy allure

When you are half fish?

Honeygloom's avatar

Keeping it real. I love it🖤😏

Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Red-haired siren calls,

In moonlit waters she preys—

Hearts drown, untethered.

Crimson locks streaming,

Whispers of a fated charm—

Deceit beneath waves.

Ocean’s fiery bloom,

Entangling nets of desire—

Silent depths conceal.

Honeygloom's avatar

I love all these red-heads😍🔥

Aaron McDonald's avatar

Lapping him in fins

Like beating waves like breaststrokes

Like drowning like please

Honeygloom's avatar

If I’m wrong, don’t hate me. But is your mermaid like, a valley (well trench??) girl? Because I absolutely love that🖤

Aaron McDonald's avatar

Haha, LIKE yeah. He deserved what he got anyway… cheating on me with that merbitch stephanie. Like, what a skank

Honeygloom's avatar

Stephanie!? Like gag me with a spoon 🥄

Amos's avatar

Valley Mermaid! I love it.

Like it's so briney

My hair. Salty. Like so gross

Gag me with a chart

Honeygloom's avatar

🤣 hairspray, like doesn’t even work down here.

Amos's avatar

I'm so pissed "Gag me with a sextant" is six syllables. 🤣

Honeygloom's avatar

Gag me with an astrolabe???

Ika Wright's avatar

Lovely prose. They are rather quite the most lively of predators

Ika Wright's avatar

I meant lovely, I can't seem to edit my comment at the moment

Honeygloom's avatar

I bet they’re both! They seem to have a mischievous streak at least!

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May 2, 2024
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Honeygloom's avatar

Mmm… sounds so peaceful. 😈