This is a little ambiguous for me. I’m not sure if that’s how you meant it, but I really like it. I’m not sure if the narrator is changing or feeding, or if I’m supposed to read it as the wolf self eating the human self. Either way, it’s unsettling and I love it.
You howl to her light
Drunk on her beams, blood-stained jaws
Lycanthropic dreams
Love this! That little internal rhyme is so nice.
Changes takes their toll
To stretch, strain against set bounds
The new-formed self howls
Drooling blood and spit
Hackles raised like a wire brush
Silhouette of death
Fantastic image! Very vivid, I love it!
I like this, very vivid imagery, I can feel the strain. Very cool!
This is a little ambiguous for me. I’m not sure if that’s how you meant it, but I really like it. I’m not sure if the narrator is changing or feeding, or if I’m supposed to read it as the wolf self eating the human self. Either way, it’s unsettling and I love it.