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The Chronicler's avatar

You howl to her light

Drunk on her beams, blood-stained jaws

Lycanthropic dreams

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Honeygloom's avatar

Love this! That little internal rhyme is so nice.

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Daniel Baldwin's avatar

Changes takes their toll

To stretch, strain against set bounds

The new-formed self howls

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Jon T's avatar

Drooling blood and spit

Hackles raised like a wire brush

Silhouette of death

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Honeygloom's avatar

Fantastic image! Very vivid, I love it!

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Honeygloom's avatar

I like this, very vivid imagery, I can feel the strain. Very cool!

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Honeygloom's avatar

This is a little ambiguous for me. I’m not sure if that’s how you meant it, but I really like it. I’m not sure if the narrator is changing or feeding, or if I’m supposed to read it as the wolf self eating the human self. Either way, it’s unsettling and I love it.

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