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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Let me lie bitten

Sleep sweat-stilled through molten hours

Barkless in the sun

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Honeygloom's avatar

So lovely, “molten hours” is so perfect🖤

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Caro Henry's avatar

I love, love this!

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

I thank you so so much

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

Flame on, ye bright star

And build the fire within me

Mind bursts with star's glow

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Honeygloom's avatar

Very cool! I love the last line!

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A.P. Murphy's avatar

Dogstar, Puppyplanet -

The orbit is awry, they say,

Scoundrel sun adrift, afire.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I love this! Like some cryptic interstellar missive🖤

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erniet's avatar

Dog star rise, summer

Fades into memory. Now

The march to winter.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Really looking forward to winter 🥵 Love how you brought us around to the cycle of things, always good to remember when things get too hot🖤

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erniet's avatar

The Dog Days used to mark the start of the grain harvest; the first day of fall in the old calendar is August 1…Lammas, or Loaf-mass, when the first loaves of new bread were brought to the church for the sacrament.

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Honeygloom's avatar

I’m mostly familiar with the Old Norse calendar, where the dog days fall very appropriately into Sólmanúðr, aka, Sun Month😂

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erniet's avatar

In the old northern European calendar (used by the everyone but the Romans) the beginnings of seasons fell on the cross-quarter days…that is, the days mid-way between the solstices and equinoxes…because these corresponded to the agricultural cycle. Candlemass (Feb 2) (or imbolc in the Celtic) was the first day of spring and corresponded to lambing. May Day (Beltane) was the first day of summer and was the planting time. Loaf-mass or Lammas (Lughnasa, Aug 1) was the start of the harvest. All Hallows (Samhain) was the first day of winter when all was stored away.

Farmer’s Almanacs still have this info; I like to keep the old beginning and endings of the seasons ‘cause it makes more sense.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Huh, that’s cool. I’ve gone by the Old Norse schedule for a while now, they didn’t really separate things into four seasons, just summer and winter, but each month is named for what you do in that month or a characteristic. My favorite is górmanúðr, Slaughter Month (as in animals for winter storage, but it sounds cool).

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erniet's avatar

Yes…there are three slaughtering times. The first is in February when lambs/kids are born. The males are killed for meat and then there’s milk from the ewes and nannies. Then the calf slaughtering later in the spring, same deal. Then in winter any fattened steers, pigs, or culled cows going into winter!

Having just two months in Scandinavia makes sense…it’s so far north!😬

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

I live in Las Vegas., the high desert. This is our fourth year celebrating 4th of July in LV so I'm intimately familiar with the dog days of summer.

las vegas sun flares

//pavement screams beneath hot feet//

mirage dances...bare

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heat! waves ripple---air

sharp breaths in the oven's mouth

sky melts; blue to white

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neon pulse, still bright

sizzling air hums electric

night can't cool the bones

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mirage city glows...

shimmering in the heat's grip

sand whispers secrets

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desert's fiery kiss

sears the soul, leaves no respite---

107...scorches

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Honeygloom's avatar

I feel these! We’ve been in triple digits for a week and there’s no end in sight. I really love your mirage reference, and “sharp breaths in the oven’s mouth,” such a great line🖤

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Thank you. I love LV even in the dog days of summer.

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Thea Wood's avatar

And where are my manners? The poem radiates Vegas!

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

I write about Las Vegas all the time. Almost every day I learn something new and unique about the city and the mountains surrounding it.

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Thea Wood's avatar

How did I not pick up on this? Seeing your work with fresh eyes.

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

LOL. Living here does impact my writing for the good and the bad.

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Mirage hotel to tumble in time. Baked beans flatten pancakes. Waffles weave with desert dry heat while soles of feet melt slots to hot to handle.

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Mirage volcano gone up in smoke. Literally.

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Gloria. Mirage volcano gone? July 4th demo?

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

The Mirage has new owners. It is being extensively renovated including dismantling the iconic volcano.

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Thea Wood's avatar

Love visiting Vegas for shows— was just there for the Dead’s Sphere run! Odd. I took you for a New Yorker. Was even going to invite you to meet up come September — perhaps at a bookstore for tea (or bubbly) and talk music, poetry, politics, and art.

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

For some reason I thought you lived in Los Angeles

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Thea Wood's avatar

Haha! Maybe it’s the music thing. People assume LA, NY, Nashville or Austin (where I lived for 22 years). We will connect— I’m sure of it. Maybe we can pull together a women of substack meetup online some time…

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

We visit NYC on a regular basis and I would love to meet you! We are coming next week for a week of business and pleasure.

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Thea Wood's avatar

Feline guardians

Poised, taming the dogs of war

Bane of Sirius

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Honeygloom's avatar

I also love “bane of Sirius” what a great line🖤

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

Bane of Sirius. That is good!

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Thea Wood's avatar

Thx! I have my moments 😆

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Leigh Parrish's avatar

Only mad dogs and

Englishmen venture outside.

For me, central air.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh me too. Didn’t know that about Englishmen😂

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Ra,Ra,Ra the sun rises

Canis beside Master. ahead

Rise Nile rise.

Mountain’s flood;

Crocodile’s feed downriver

On heat prostration dead.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh very dark ending, and I love the first line, too🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

The sweltering Sun,

So deadly in many ways,

Yet so seductive... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

Mm seductive huh? All that fun in the sun🖤

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

It claims to be our friend, but it would burn us all if it had the chance! Haha... 😎

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Blame the dogs, will ya?

My canine superheroine Cerberus' patriarchal line is alien dogs from the area around Sirius.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Oh I love it! Mixing Greek myths and outer space, how cool!

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

My t(w)inkling Dog Star

Held firm by celestial leash

Bares teeth toward Dawn.

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Honeygloom's avatar

This is a brilliant image! I love it🖤

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Caleb Taylor's avatar

Climate change is now

Floods, storms, ecosystems’ shift

Heat will kill you first

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Honeygloom's avatar

Feeling it, we’re in the middle of a heat wave, twoish weeks of triple digit temps. My AC bill might also kill me😅

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Caleb Taylor's avatar

Yeah, we just got our attic insulated, and it has been fantastic for our AC in the heat

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