No you're not. I read it back and was like, doh--I did that thing where I write something that nobody has context to truly grip.
I ate lunch over at demon deacons house one time because I was friends with his son. Demon deacon yelled at his family the entire time. The look in his eyes...eek.
Eh... with poetry in general it doesn’t matter as much if you have context. With horror haiku… separating the movie references from the non-movie references can get dicey, lol.
That sounds like a scene from a Conjuring movie, geez 😬
Using the word ‘rebels’ makes them seem like teenage hooligans to me. I don’t know if you meant it this way, but it’s dismissive in a way that I like. It’s a different perspective and that’s always interesting🖤
We are meat puppets
Creatures possessed by angels
Or the demonic...
We do seem to be, well said. Me I’m an angel-faced cream puff with demon filling.
Tickseed-yellow house
Deacon’s family cowers
Cruel eyes, red, sour
I like this, such cool details with the house color and the red eyes🖤 Ngl, I don’t know what the reference is though😅
A demon deacon 🤷😂
😂 K sometimes I’m dumb, but at least I admit it🤦♀️🤣
No you're not. I read it back and was like, doh--I did that thing where I write something that nobody has context to truly grip.
I ate lunch over at demon deacons house one time because I was friends with his son. Demon deacon yelled at his family the entire time. The look in his eyes...eek.
Eh... with poetry in general it doesn’t matter as much if you have context. With horror haiku… separating the movie references from the non-movie references can get dicey, lol.
That sounds like a scene from a Conjuring movie, geez 😬
Don't know if it qualifies, but:
Chaos rage and wrath
Without name and binding spell
All these will be yours
Everything counts! Nameless rage and wrath especially 😌
Dance in darkness
Demons blight the scene
Take my hand away
Very mysterious and eerie, well done🖤
Coiling concubines
Silhouette the forever
Setting sun in the
City of Demons.
Wildering roads, lined by lust-
Rous pillars of fright,
Where the possessed
Masturbate in their respite
From constant seizing.
Wow, so many wild details! I was still trying to wrap my head around ’coiling concubines’ and you hit me with that last bit. Nicely done🖤
look into my eyes
I offer you a favor
your eternity
Haunting and tempting 🖤Well done!
My inner demons
How can I keep them at bay?
I just howl and bray.
I mean howling and braying are pretty fun so…
The fallen angels
Rebels, only purpose now
Destruction of men
Using the word ‘rebels’ makes them seem like teenage hooligans to me. I don’t know if you meant it this way, but it’s dismissive in a way that I like. It’s a different perspective and that’s always interesting🖤
Huh, interesting. I didn't think about that term connoting that. Males sense though. I was thinking more like "Fall of the Rebel Angels" kinda vein. 😀
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Fall_of_the_Rebel_Angels
My favorite guy in that painting is the little blobby guy with buck teeth in the upper right.