June 6 - Soucouyant
Burn and rage, Desire!
Consume my heart and mind whole
Your kiss cools the flames
Nice! I love the direction this took!
Darkness rests on chests
Light pressure to heavy heaves
A succubus crushes the flames
Last light from your dreams.
That last line is so good!! I want to write a whole novel about it🖤
Batteries come included.
Mine wasn't very poetic. I was too busy thinking "cool".
Very interesting topic and I loved your haiku. Far more dignified than mine.
If there was one of these weird vampires that I’d want to be, I think it would be this one. Imagine just becoming flame 🔥
Sprinkled down rice at the crossroads
Fireball woman flummoxed in counting
I chewed up her skin right then
so she ain't got nowhere to go
Awesome!! I love the OCD aspect to vampires like this. Also the narrative voice is great, really gives it some flavor.
Burn and rage, Desire!
Consume my heart and mind whole
Your kiss cools the flames
Nice! I love the direction this took!
Darkness rests on chests
Light pressure to heavy heaves
A succubus crushes the flames
Last light from your dreams.
That last line is so good!! I want to write a whole novel about it🖤
Batteries come included.
Mine wasn't very poetic. I was too busy thinking "cool".
Very interesting topic and I loved your haiku. Far more dignified than mine.
If there was one of these weird vampires that I’d want to be, I think it would be this one. Imagine just becoming flame 🔥
Sprinkled down rice at the crossroads
Fireball woman flummoxed in counting
I chewed up her skin right then
so she ain't got nowhere to go
Awesome!! I love the OCD aspect to vampires like this. Also the narrative voice is great, really gives it some flavor.