June 6 - Soucouyant
Darkness rests on chests
Light pressure to heavy heaves
A succubus crushes the flames
Last light from your dreams.
That last line is so good!! I want to write a whole novel about it🖤
Batteries come included.
Mine wasn't very poetic. I was too busy thinking "cool".
Very interesting topic and I loved your haiku. Far more dignified than mine.
If there was one of these weird vampires that I’d want to be, I think it would be this one. Imagine just becoming flame 🔥
Sprinkled down rice at the crossroads
Fireball woman flummoxed in counting
I chewed up her skin right then
so she ain't got nowhere to go
Awesome!! I love the OCD aspect to vampires like this. Also the narrative voice is great, really gives it some flavor.
Nice! I love the direction this took!
Darkness rests on chests
Light pressure to heavy heaves
A succubus crushes the flames
Last light from your dreams.
That last line is so good!! I want to write a whole novel about it🖤
Batteries come included.
Mine wasn't very poetic. I was too busy thinking "cool".
Very interesting topic and I loved your haiku. Far more dignified than mine.
If there was one of these weird vampires that I’d want to be, I think it would be this one. Imagine just becoming flame 🔥
Sprinkled down rice at the crossroads
Fireball woman flummoxed in counting
I chewed up her skin right then
so she ain't got nowhere to go
Awesome!! I love the OCD aspect to vampires like this. Also the narrative voice is great, really gives it some flavor.
Nice! I love the direction this took!