January 1 - Ice
Crystal veins entwine
My frozen heart blue with cold
Shatters at your touch
I love this image, it’s so beautifully tragic. 🖤
The ice cracks beneath
Frigid water swallows whole
Where did I fall through?
This is one of those panic inducing haikus. Made me take a deeeep breath, nice work 🖤
Was it wrong of me to have "break on through" by The Doors playing in my head while I wrote this? 😂
Haha! No, not wrong at all.
***CW: trauma survivors take care***
Icy veins make for
Bloody water down the drain.
Nah, I will remain.
***CW OVER***
I love the fighting spirit infused throughout. Well done🖤
I thought you loved me,
But when you stabbed me, I knew -
Your soul is frigid hell.
Brutal! I love it🖤
what I woke up to
on new years day this morning
where's my ice scraper?
Oof don’t envy that. But at least you got a good haiku out of it. Any state or happenstance that produces a haiku is good luck I heard.
Tapping on the ice
I see a face, ballooned cheeks
Panicked reflection
🥶Made my heart beat a little faster. 🖤
Fractal splinters spread
A gruesome, grasping death threat,
Slow until the end.
I love that visual 🖤
With ice in my veins
My blood congeals like syrup
Strawberry Slurpee
Oh dear god, well done!😝
/Harassment mode on
Unrepentant man
five seven five haiku form
six is so ice like
/Harassment mode off
Sir, I’m not going to lie, you have baffled me. This haiku appears to be in the correct form. Is it harassment because I had to count? Lol, I’m confused. Not unpleasantly, just your standard huh.
Your prompt haiku is 5-6-5
Still Haiku, but I felt the urge to toss a wee pebble into your pond ;-)
Damn! So it is. Pebble gobbled up into my dark and bottomless maw. I rarely feel bad about breaking rules 😜
On an icy road
Center yourself above your feet
Lest ass and ground meet.
Faith froze and shattered
Like an icicle that falls
On the ground of grief
Wow, nice take! 🖤
The dark breath of winter’s night.
My lungs with icy crystals torn.
The dawn will never come.
(Not really haiku, because I’ve no idea how to write one.🤷♀️)
Do you like mirrors?
I can keep your face unchanged
Always young, frozen
Haha! No worries! It’s a great poem, that middle line is wicked. 🖤
If you want to learn more about haiku, you can go to the post pinned to the top of the Horror Haiku Section on my newsletter. Happy to see you here!
Crystal veins entwine
My frozen heart blue with cold
Shatters at your touch
I love this image, it’s so beautifully tragic. 🖤
The ice cracks beneath
Frigid water swallows whole
Where did I fall through?
This is one of those panic inducing haikus. Made me take a deeeep breath, nice work 🖤
Was it wrong of me to have "break on through" by The Doors playing in my head while I wrote this? 😂
Haha! No, not wrong at all.
***CW: trauma survivors take care***
Icy veins make for
Bloody water down the drain.
Nah, I will remain.
***CW OVER***
I love the fighting spirit infused throughout. Well done🖤
I thought you loved me,
But when you stabbed me, I knew -
Your soul is frigid hell.
Brutal! I love it🖤
what I woke up to
on new years day this morning
where's my ice scraper?
Oof don’t envy that. But at least you got a good haiku out of it. Any state or happenstance that produces a haiku is good luck I heard.
Tapping on the ice
I see a face, ballooned cheeks
Panicked reflection
🥶Made my heart beat a little faster. 🖤
Fractal splinters spread
A gruesome, grasping death threat,
Slow until the end.
I love that visual 🖤
With ice in my veins
My blood congeals like syrup
Strawberry Slurpee
Oh dear god, well done!😝
/Harassment mode on
Unrepentant man
five seven five haiku form
six is so ice like
/Harassment mode off
Sir, I’m not going to lie, you have baffled me. This haiku appears to be in the correct form. Is it harassment because I had to count? Lol, I’m confused. Not unpleasantly, just your standard huh.
Your prompt haiku is 5-6-5
Still Haiku, but I felt the urge to toss a wee pebble into your pond ;-)
Damn! So it is. Pebble gobbled up into my dark and bottomless maw. I rarely feel bad about breaking rules 😜
On an icy road
Center yourself above your feet
Lest ass and ground meet.
Faith froze and shattered
Like an icicle that falls
On the ground of grief
Wow, nice take! 🖤
The dark breath of winter’s night.
My lungs with icy crystals torn.
The dawn will never come.
(Not really haiku, because I’ve no idea how to write one.🤷♀️)
Do you like mirrors?
I can keep your face unchanged
Always young, frozen
Haha! No worries! It’s a great poem, that middle line is wicked. 🖤
If you want to learn more about haiku, you can go to the post pinned to the top of the Horror Haiku Section on my newsletter. Happy to see you here!