January 1 - Ice
Crystal veins entwine
My frozen heart blue with cold
Shatters at your touch
I love this image, it’s so beautifully tragic. 🖤
The ice cracks beneath
Frigid water swallows whole
Where did I fall through?
This is one of those panic inducing haikus. Made me take a deeeep breath, nice work 🖤
Was it wrong of me to have "break on through" by The Doors playing in my head while I wrote this? 😂
Haha! No, not wrong at all.
***CW: trauma survivors take care***
Icy veins make for
Bloody water down the drain.
Nah, I will remain.
***CW OVER***
I love the fighting spirit infused throughout. Well done🖤
I thought you loved me,
But when you stabbed me, I knew -
Your soul is frigid hell.
Brutal! I love it🖤
what I woke up to
on new years day this morning
where's my ice scraper?
Oof don’t envy that. But at least you got a good haiku out of it. Any state or happenstance that produces a haiku is good luck I heard.
Tapping on the ice
I see a face, ballooned cheeks
Panicked reflection
🥶Made my heart beat a little faster. 🖤
With ice in my veins
My blood congeals like syrup
Strawberry Slurpee
Oh dear god, well done!😝
/Harassment mode on
Unrepentant man
five seven five haiku form
six is so ice like
/Harassment mode off
Sir, I’m not going to lie, you have baffled me. This haiku appears to be in the correct form. Is it harassment because I had to count? Lol, I’m confused. Not unpleasantly, just your standard huh.
Your prompt haiku is 5-6-5
Still Haiku, but I felt the urge to toss a wee pebble into your pond ;-)
Damn! So it is. Pebble gobbled up into my dark and bottomless maw. I rarely feel bad about breaking rules 😜
On an icy road
Center yourself above your feet
Lest ass and ground meet.
Faith froze and shattered
Like an icicle that falls
On the ground of grief
Wow, nice take! 🖤
Do you like mirrors?
I can keep your face unchanged
Always young, frozen
Haha! No worries! It’s a great poem, that middle line is wicked. 🖤
If you want to learn more about haiku, you can go to the post pinned to the top of the Horror Haiku Section on my newsletter. Happy to see you here!
I love that visual 🖤
Crystal veins entwine
My frozen heart blue with cold
Shatters at your touch
I love this image, it’s so beautifully tragic. 🖤
The ice cracks beneath
Frigid water swallows whole
Where did I fall through?
This is one of those panic inducing haikus. Made me take a deeeep breath, nice work 🖤
Was it wrong of me to have "break on through" by The Doors playing in my head while I wrote this? 😂
Haha! No, not wrong at all.
***CW: trauma survivors take care***
Icy veins make for
Bloody water down the drain.
Nah, I will remain.
***CW OVER***
I love the fighting spirit infused throughout. Well done🖤
I thought you loved me,
But when you stabbed me, I knew -
Your soul is frigid hell.
Brutal! I love it🖤
what I woke up to
on new years day this morning
where's my ice scraper?
Oof don’t envy that. But at least you got a good haiku out of it. Any state or happenstance that produces a haiku is good luck I heard.
Tapping on the ice
I see a face, ballooned cheeks
Panicked reflection
🥶Made my heart beat a little faster. 🖤
With ice in my veins
My blood congeals like syrup
Strawberry Slurpee
Oh dear god, well done!😝
/Harassment mode on
Unrepentant man
five seven five haiku form
six is so ice like
/Harassment mode off
Sir, I’m not going to lie, you have baffled me. This haiku appears to be in the correct form. Is it harassment because I had to count? Lol, I’m confused. Not unpleasantly, just your standard huh.
Your prompt haiku is 5-6-5
Still Haiku, but I felt the urge to toss a wee pebble into your pond ;-)
Damn! So it is. Pebble gobbled up into my dark and bottomless maw. I rarely feel bad about breaking rules 😜
On an icy road
Center yourself above your feet
Lest ass and ground meet.
Faith froze and shattered
Like an icicle that falls
On the ground of grief
Wow, nice take! 🖤
Do you like mirrors?
I can keep your face unchanged
Always young, frozen
Haha! No worries! It’s a great poem, that middle line is wicked. 🖤
If you want to learn more about haiku, you can go to the post pinned to the top of the Horror Haiku Section on my newsletter. Happy to see you here!
I love that visual 🖤