No, the surprise is why it's so effective. You also say just enough to get the imagination going so the horror is personal. That's a great technique; keep it up! Most often it's not good to paint the whole picture. imho...
This is a great piece. Really love the reality of this scene. I was seriously thinking of getting a raven but now-- And look: I made it to one of your short stories! Love your stuff, Honeygloom!
this is pure nightmare fuel. amazing.
Aw thanks!
Nice creepy horror. Poor kid. Awful father! Thank you for sharing this Honeygloom
Thank you for reading!
Always a pleasure to read your work once in a while, when time permits
Chillingly good!
Thank you!!!
Sins of the father! Poor Elijah;(
I know I’m sorry 😭
Elijah, we hardly knew ye. <3
😭ok next story, we’ll raise him from the dead😁
Gruesome! Knew something bad would happen to Elijah! Poor kid!😬
😬Maybe I should have warned everyone…
No, the surprise is why it's so effective. You also say just enough to get the imagination going so the horror is personal. That's a great technique; keep it up! Most often it's not good to paint the whole picture. imho...
Aw thanks! 😊
This is a great piece. Really love the reality of this scene. I was seriously thinking of getting a raven but now-- And look: I made it to one of your short stories! Love your stuff, Honeygloom!
Thank you!! I’d imagine ravens make challenging pets😅
I have a thing about challenges. It's either a raven, a crow, or a raccoon. Whatever I may choose, I'm getting some interesting scars.
A raccoon, now there’s an interesting idea. They’re probably a real handful 😂
I just watched a TikTok about them: “crack addict energy 24/7”. Hmm.
I have cat energy, absolutely not a fit for raccoon energy😂
Same here. We had three. A black tom (of course), a tabby red, and a calico. Just said goodbye to our red lady, sad to say.
Mine too! I’m glad you liked it☺️