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Saint-Lazare's avatar

Ooooooh, that plot twist was awesome 😁😁😁

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you!!

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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Great job! I love that I didn't see that twist coming!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Alex | A. R. Eldridge's avatar

Oh man that was great. I love the idea of a precognitive spectre.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Thanks!

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Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Nice one, HG! Cooked to perfection.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ha! Thank you 🙏

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EJ Trask's avatar

such a good ending!!! I also loved your descriptions of the buns. super satisfying.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you ☺️

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Great twist! A super fun and ominous ghost story!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Thank you!🙏

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