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EJ Trask's avatar

wow the world building in this! spectacular. you should stick with this story and make It longer. i would read it!!!

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Honeygloom's avatar

I can’t tell you how much I did not want to end it with that lightning strike and just wanted to keep going. I’m so glad you liked it, now I can definitely keep it in my WIP folder.

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