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A.P. Murphy's avatar

To seed our vales with ghostbane

Ajax the big bad bludgeoner

bled blood blue and brilliant

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Honeygloom's avatar

A noble sacrifice, and an even nobler alliteration😌🖤

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Dylan Delgado's avatar

Its dark blue color

Lures you in, but be careful!

Don't taste those blooms (ever!)

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Honeygloom's avatar

Yes! Well said!🖤

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Richard Blaisdell's avatar

Spurned by un- Apollo-getic god;

A hero’s gift given to another.

Angry, Ajax fell upon his sword.

From his true blood blue delphinium

Blades rose: Larkspur’s petals inscribed;

“Ai” a poisonous word of woe we know.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Really beautiful retelling🖤

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Songsterfunsterhamster's avatar

Alas my blossom,

Bloomed purple from Trojan blood,

Will also soon fall

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Honeygloom's avatar

Love this! The parallel between Ajax and the plant’s life cycle is such a nice take🖤

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

Beauty, show thyself

And harm not the gentle heart

Your fragrance does burn

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Honeygloom's avatar

Very nicely done! I love the tone of this so much!

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A.C. Cargill, Author's avatar

Thanks for the inspiration.

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Jack Bush's avatar

The first Delphinium I ever laid eyes on was a cat. A big, solid black cat with green ebony eyes. It wasn’t just the eerie eyes, but it screeched. It was an evil, high-pitch screech, not a mellow, lazy cat’s meow. Cats are crazy, self-centered ego-maniacs, and this loony black cat named for the flower had these traits down cold — to a ‘T’ for sure. That wicked, wailing screech you hear, that’s Delphenium. Beware…, be brave…

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Honeygloom's avatar

Cats like this make the best familiars🖤

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

They're sweet to a fly

Petals, pistils, stems, oh, my!

Pollen=red dry eye!

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ah! Clever and it rhymes! My hat’s off to you🖤😌

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Spreading rapidly,

In a burst of bright colour,

Pretty, but deadly... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

Pretty deadly indeed😏 Love this take!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. These Prompts are great. And it's always fun to see all the different interpretations that can 'blossom' from them. Haha... 😎

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Honeygloom's avatar

My favorite part is reading all the responses, absolutely!

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erniet's avatar

To repel ghosts:

Iron, silver, salt;

Leaves of lavender, also

Delphinium blooms.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Hmm.. you’re an expert on this subject👻

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erniet's avatar

Nah...just a Supernatural fan...and I just finished the whole Lockwood and Co. series on audio book!😁

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